Re: Pet Peeve of a Grammar Nazi
Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 11:41 pm
ArmyAndNavyVet wrote:Let's take a look at your first paragraph:
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To anyone who wishes to post their experiences about a CCW encounter. I would really like to read it. There is a pet peeve that I would like to point out before going any further. I’ve read too many accounts in the OC forum and this one as well of people that want to be taken seriously but don’t take the time to produce a message that can be read easily. If you want anyone to take you seriously please consider using paragraphs, proper punctuation and spelling.
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To anyone who wishes to post their [his] experiences about a CCW encounter.[:] I would really like to read it. There is a pet peeve that I would like to point out before going any further [farther]. I’ve read too many accounts in the OC forum[,] and this one as well[,] of people that[who] want to be taken seriously[,] but[yet] don’t take the time to produce a message that can be read easily. If you want anyone to take you seriously[,] please consider using paragraphs, proper punctuation and spelling.
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The suggested changes above represent a very cursory read of your paragraph. If you want to be a "Grammar Nazi", learn better grammar first.
Just sayin'